Shadow+Mountain

Jill pulls up to this camp area looking around to see if was big enough. It was. "This will do."
===Everyone got out of their cars and started setting up camp. No one said anything while they did so. Max was done first so he decided to start the camp fire. as Max went deeper into the woods away from camp to gather wood he too felt the cool breeze up his spine. Max shivered but thought nothing of it and went back to camp.===

"Lets make marshmallows! soon anyways..." Emily was extremely excited.
===Emily went into her tent to get the marshmallows. As emily exited the tent she too finialy felt the cool breeze the other two felt she shivered just like they did, "Is it just me or did it get cold? ITS SUMMER!"===

"OK who's first on story telling?" asked Emily anxious.
==="I will" said Max. "One day Susie was playing with her dolly in the barn, and her dad came charging with rage, grabbed her by the collor of her dress and with his other hand slapped her across the face screaming at her saying 'Your the reason she's dead!' slapped her again and called her a dirty name.He threw her to the ground then went back into the house. --" "whoa who is she? the woman that the dad said she was the reasin she's dead?" Emily cut off Max. "No one really knows..... Susie just layed there chanting something in another language crying. Her mouth was full of blood from when she got slapped.She say her dad come in with a gun and shot her in the face.... Then about a month later he was hunted by Susie, Susie made his life a living hell or tried anyways. legend has it that she hung him.... witch doesn't make scence cuz she was dead and was a spirit....spirits cant kill....can they?" Max said confused "I never really thought about that til now."===

Emily looking at Max with confusion "Wait how the hell do you know know all this?!"
==="I looked for ghost stories on the web, and this storie came up.... it had a picture of her when she was playing with her doll and a picture of her dad in pain after someones death... no one knows who though and there was a picture of him hanging outside of the barn saying that his name was William Greyshaw..."===

Both Jill and Emily knew right then and there that Max was telling the truth. "OK we believe you." they said.
===Jill and Emily went into their tent hoping for some sleep, Max was in his tent trying to figure out how Suise hung William Greyshaw. Deep in the woods came a sorrowful cry. Emily jumped straight out of bed along with Jill. they looked at each other then went to the camp fire where Max was. "Did yoiu hear it too!" they asked. Max looked down "Yes unfortunately, and i don't think it was human i think it was a spirit." Emily got all worried. and Jill just looked at him like hes gone crazy. "What the hell Max whats wrong with you and your supernatuaral belifes.!" They heard the same sorrowful cry coming from not to far in the woods. "OK lets go see who that is and help them! otherwise we will never get any sleep.... Well? don't just stand there come on!" Jill said getting frustrated from not getting her sleep.===

===Jill grabbed her flash light and jacket, and slipped on her shoes. They followed the cry through the woods. The cry lead them to an old farm house and a barn. "I knew it" Max said to himself. "Guys I dont think we should be here... this is where you know who died and was so called murdered." Max said really worried. "Now how would you know that?" asked Jill. "Because I saw this picture in the old news papper that how!" "Oh why didn't you tell that bit of information!? if it was in the news paper its gotta be true....right Emily?" asked Jill. "Yes" Said Emily wondering closer to the old house. "EMILY! Emily what do you think your doing?!" Maxed said concerned. "Finding out the truth or at least trying to. Plus I love old things this fasantats me. I want to know how many cool old stuff I can find in that old thing." Emily said.=== ===Emily walked to the old farm house not thinking anything of it. Little did she know that William Greyshaws spirit still romes the house. As she got closer the cry got louder. "Guys! i think i know where the noise is coming from!" yelled Emily over her shoulder.Each step she took up the stairs creaked she walked on the patio smiling at the old chairs. A mouse ran under her foot "AHHH!" she freaked out and her foot went through the old weak boards. "Help! HELP!" she screamed. Max and Emily ran to the house and up the stairs to the patio and helped her up. "You're bleeding." Jill said. "Hey max give me a hand and lift her onto that chair it seems sturdy enough. Oh and can I see your bandanna please so I can stop the wound from bleeding. Emily are you OK? The cut is not that big, just long is all, I think you cut a vein? I think that's why is bleeding a lot. But i could be wrong." Jill took the bandanna and wrapped it tightly around Emilys leg. "OW! That hurt. I feel fine lets go into the house I think someone is in there." Jill looked at her, and helped her up. "OK if you truly want to."===

===The friends walked into the house Emily looked around as she walked not paying attention where she was walking. Jill looked at the floor as she walked not paying attention where her friends were going Max was keeping an eye on Emily. Old stuff hung from the wall, like pictures covered in dust, horse shoes on the wall for decoration and an old fashion stove and sink. Emily took a picture off the wall and blew on it, it only got some of the dust off of it then she wiped the dust and dirt off. The picture was of a young lady at least in her 20s pregnant, she had long blond wavy hair an old dress, a forced smile, and in her eyes Emily knew she was scared. "Hey guys come check this out!" said Emily. "Its just a picture Emily" said Jill. "Not just any picture look at her face she is scared maybe this links to some horrific story or history? i don't know maybe your right." Emily said looking sad at the lady in the picture she flipped the picture over and in neat cursive said 'Kathryn Greyshaw' "Um I think this is why William said your the reason shes dead to Susie." Emily lifted the picture and showed them the back. "I think your right but she could have just died giving birth to her. You never know" said Jill.===